2023高考考試必看的——高考滿分作文附解析點(diǎn)評(píng)「建議收藏」

由網(wǎng)絡(luò)整理 分享時(shí)間：2024-03-16 11:45:43 收藏本文

高考是人生最重要的時(shí)刻，

高考作文往往出題人很刁鉆

我們應(yīng)該明白一些寫作技巧，看見試題怎么寫寫什么這都很重要！

下面是全國一些重要省份及全國卷試題的作文解析以及點(diǎn)評(píng)

2023全國I卷高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展．請(qǐng)寫一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：

1．寫信目的；

2．個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；

3．能做的事情．

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．結(jié)束語已為你寫好．

【分析】高分句型

1．Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings， I am writing to apply for volunteering．

句子里，現(xiàn)在分詞Knowing 和賓語從句that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings做原因狀語．

我知道當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館將舉辦一個(gè)中國畫展覽，所以寫信申請(qǐng)志愿服務(wù)．

2．As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old ， I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners．

句子里，修飾先行詞 a student ，關(guān)系詞 who引導(dǎo)定語從句 has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old．

作為一名5歲就開始學(xué)習(xí)中國畫的學(xué)生，我很高興有機(jī)會(huì)向外國人介紹中國畫．

【解答】Dear sir or madam，

I am a Chinese student named Li Hua， who is studying in London during the summer vacation． Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings， I am writing to apply for volunteering．【高分句型一】（寫信目的）

As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old ， I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners．【高分句型二】Besides， my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply．（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)以及能做的事情）

I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity． Looking forward to your early reply．（期盼回復(fù)）

Yours，

LiHua．

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．

2023全國II卷高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長李華．請(qǐng)寫封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1．比賽信息；

2．賽前準(zhǔn)備；

3．表達(dá)期待．

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

【分析】高分句型一：I am writing to tell you a piece of news that a volleyball game will be held on the playground this Friday afternoon．

譯文：我寫信是想告訴你一個(gè)消息，今天下午排球比賽將在操場(chǎng)上舉行．

分析：這句話使用that引導(dǎo)同位語從句．

高分句型二：Only when we improve our skills and build up our strength can we ensure the victory．

譯文：只有檔我們提高技能，增強(qiáng)實(shí)力，才能保證勝利．

分析：倒裝句．

【解答】Dear Chris，

I am writing to tell you a piece of news that a volleyball game will be held on the playground this Friday afternoon．【高分句型一】Our team will play against Class 2 team， which means it will be a close game．（比賽信息） We should make good preparations for it so that we can win the game． As a result， it is necessary for us to practice playing it every afternoon after school． Only when we improve our skills and build up our strength can we ensure the victory．【高分句型二】（賽前準(zhǔn)備）

Hopefully， we can win the game．（表達(dá)愿望）

Yours，

Li Hua

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來．動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．

2023全國III卷高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)．請(qǐng)寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：

1．時(shí)間；

2．活動(dòng)安排；

3．歡迎他表演節(jié)目．

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

【分析】高分句型一：In the music festival， we invite some famous singers and pianist to perform， who will also give some lessons to the students．

譯文：在音樂節(jié)上，我們邀請(qǐng)了一些著名的歌手和鋼琴家表演，他們也會(huì)給學(xué)生上一些課．

分析：who引導(dǎo)定語從句．

高分句型二： If possible， you are welcome to perform in the festival， which will be a great experience．

譯文：如果可能的話，歡迎您在節(jié)日里表演，這將是一次很好的體驗(yàn)．

分析：if引導(dǎo)省略的時(shí)間狀語從句，which引導(dǎo)定語從句．

【解答】Dear Allen，

I am writing to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school． We can take part in the music festival in the school hall next Friday afternoon．（時(shí)間） In the music festival， we invite some famous singers and pianist to perform， who will also give some lessons to the students．【高分句型一】In addition， some students can have a chance to cooperate with this musicians．（活動(dòng)安排）As a music fan， you are bound to participate in the festival． If possible， you are welcome to perform in the festival， which will be a great experience．【高分句型二】（歡迎他表演節(jié)目）Hopefully， you can take part in it and dont miss the chance．Yours，Li Hua

江蘇省2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章．

Li Jiang： Have you heard this？ A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month．

Su Hua： Yes， I have． Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony．

Li Jiang：But it seems people have different opinions．

Su Hua： What do you think？

Li Jiang： I think its a good idea． Its an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students．

Su Hua： I agree． But we dont have to dress that way． Thats not our daily style． Besides， its not very convenient．

Li Jiang： You see， its the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for． Just the right occasion．

Su Hua： I prefer the school uniform． Its nice． Its also a better display of our school culture．

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．用約30個(gè)詞概括上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2．在上述場(chǎng)合，你是否傾向于穿中國傳統(tǒng)服裝？請(qǐng)說明理由（不少于兩點(diǎn)）．

【寫作要求】

1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3．不必寫標(biāo)題．

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．

【分析】高分句型一：The main question presented in the dialogue is whether the students should wear traditional costumes during a ceremony for foreign students．

譯文：對(duì)話中提出的主要問題是，在外國學(xué)生的儀式上，學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該穿傳統(tǒng)服裝．

分析：過去分詞做定語，whether引導(dǎo)表語從句．

高分句型二： They are highly representative of our traditions， and will undoubtedly leave a deep impression on the foreign students who are coming for a cultural exchange．

譯文：他們高度代表了我們的傳統(tǒng)，無疑會(huì)給前來參加"文化"交流的外國學(xué)生留下深刻印象．

分析：who引導(dǎo)定語從句．

【解答】The main question presented in the dialogue is whether the students should wear traditional costumes during a ceremony for foreign students．【高分句型一】The students had each given their own stand and reasons．（概述）

I am more inclined to agree with Li Jiang， taking into consideration of the following perspectives．First，traditional costumes are one of the most suitable items when it comes to presenting our culture． They are highly representative of our traditions， and will undoubtedly leave a deep impression on the foreign students who are coming for a cultural exchange．【高分句型二】 Second，attending the event in traditional Chinese dress may open up several opportunities for interaction． The organizer can come up with several activities based on the attire itself， such as inviting the foreign students to try our traditional costumes．（你是否傾向于穿中國傳統(tǒng)服裝？請(qǐng)說明理由）

To conclude，my advice is that the students should wear traditional Chinese dress for this occasion．（結(jié)論）

天津市2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動(dòng)．活動(dòng)期間，英方教師Chris將做一個(gè)有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座．現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件：

（1）你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；

（2）選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；

（3）希望從中有何收獲．

注意：

（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；

（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Chris，

Im Li Jin， a student at Chenguang High School．

Thank you for your time．

Yours，

Li Jin

【分析】高分句型一：I am interested in all kinds of music， among which Jazz is my favorite．

譯文：我對(duì)各種音樂都感興趣，其中爵士樂是我最喜歡的．

分析：among which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句．

高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz．

譯文：如果你能增加一些享受爵士樂的課程，我會(huì)很感激的．

分析：固定句型appreciate it if…

【解答】Dear Chris，

Im Li Jin， a student at Chenguang High School．I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week﹣long summer exchange． During the activity， you will give a lecture on Western art． You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about．（寫信目的）

From my personal note， music is my priority．（你喜歡的講座話題）I am interested in all kinds of music， among which Jazz is my favorite．【高分句型一】I want to know about the history of jazz， and some famous jazz singers．（選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容）

I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz．【高分句型二】（希望從中有何收獲）

Thank you for your time．

Yours，

Li Jin

北京市2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華．你們班上周組織了一次以"勞動(dòng)最光榮"為主題的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個(gè)過程．

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．

提示詞：西瓜 watermelon

【分析】高分句型一：When I got home， I packed up my luggage for the trip．

譯文：當(dāng)我到家的時(shí)候，我為這次旅行收拾行李．

分析：when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句．

高分句型二：While working， I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun．

譯文：當(dāng)工作的時(shí)候，我意識(shí)到在炎熱的太陽下面在田里勞作是多么難．

分析：使用while引導(dǎo)省略的時(shí)間狀語從句，realized后面是how引導(dǎo)賓語從句．

【解答】Last week I took part in a farm work programme in the suburbs．（引出話題）

At the class meeting， our teacher told us about the programme with the theme "Working is most beautiful"． And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands．（圖一）When I got home， I packed up my luggage for the trip．【高分句型一】（圖二）On the farm，we helped pick watermelons． While working， I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun．【高分句型二】（圖三）When I came back home，I shared my experiences with my parents． And they were very proud of me．（圖四）

浙江省2023高考英語作文

【試題回顧】

假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家．請(qǐng)給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1．表示感謝；

2．回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；

3．臨別祝愿．

注意：

1．詞數(shù)80左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

【分析】高分句型一：It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture．

譯文：是你和我分享了豐富的英語和英語文化知識(shí)．

分析：使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句．

高分句型二：Never will I forget you and your kindness．

譯文：我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記你和你的善良．

分析：使用倒裝句．

【解答】Dear Chris，

I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long．We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help． I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English．（表示感謝）

While studying in China， you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English．It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture．【高分句型一】Never will I forget you and your kindness．【高分句型二】（回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助）

It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible．（表達(dá)愿望）

Yours，

Li Hua

需要高清打印版可以私信我